A More Perfect [ by Jimmy McInnes

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A self-identified conceptual work tends to announce its completeness prior to reading, asking us to examine the idea rather than the words on the page. But McInnes’s A More Perfect [ demands to be read and rewards the reader. Far from Goldsmith’s assembly-line literature, each lines bear the careful marks of a wordsmith
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Iconic political speeches are some of the best remembered and most repeated passages in contemporary English language. Especially in the United States of America, what child doesn’t know Abraham Lincoln's “Fourscore and seven years ago..." or Roosevelt's "The only thing we have to fear..."?

Taking as its source text Barack Obama's campaign speech from March 18, 2008, A More Perfect [ by Jimmy McInnes acts as a poetic translation of the rhetorical devices often used in political speeches. Like poetry, the campaign speech depends heavily upon the manipulation of language—the ways in which words are able to strategically twist intention and distract the eye. McInnes's poetry exposes the inner workings of the political speech, as a genre of text as premeditated as any work of poetry or fiction.

A More Perfect [ blends both political and formal linguistic concerns, garnering comparisons to Jena Osman's Corporate Relations and Alice Oswald's Memorial in their negotiation of source texts. Readers with an interest in language, linguistics, and rhetoric, and those with a particular interest in political themes and formal innovation, will relish this entertaining and culturally poignant read.
 

About Jimmy McInnes

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Jimmy McInnes was born and raised on Ontario's Bruce Peninsula. His first chapbook, Begin Speech With , was released by Ferno House in the fall of 2013. His poetry has appeared in various journals, including This Magazine, ditch, The Puritan, Descant , and the Capilano Review Web Folio . His work has been shortlisted for the Great Canadian Literary Hunt and the Robert Kroetsch Award for Innovative Poetry. He lives in Toronto, where he completed his MFA in Creative Writing at the University of Guelph, and is currently employed as a political hack. A MORE PERFECT [ is his first book-length work of poetry.
 
Published April 1, 2015 by BookThug. 128 pages
Genres: Literature & Fiction. Non-fiction
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Reviewed by David B. Hobbs on Apr 24 2016

A self-identified conceptual work tends to announce its completeness prior to reading, asking us to examine the idea rather than the words on the page. But McInnes’s A More Perfect [ demands to be read and rewards the reader. Far from Goldsmith’s assembly-line literature, each lines bear the careful marks of a wordsmith

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