Fourth and Goal! by John Edward Avery Sr.
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"Avery’s writing borders on a stream of consciousness. He mentions events, then meanders off in another direction, leaving readers hanging...What hurts the book most, though, is its disorganization. Tighter editing and a more coherent narrative would have helped Avery deliver a more powerful story."
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"When I got to the cemetery it was still dark.
I found my way to my mother’s grave. I told her my whole heart. I gave her a report about all her
children . we are blame for everything that is broke or missing . I have to fight for them all the time.
Pounene i am tired, I have no more to give, this is too much for me. I began to cry. I was so sure she
would get up out of that grave, but she never did. the sun was coming up. death must be a powerful
thing , when it wont let you come and see about your child."
 

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Published April 28, 2015 by Trafford Publishing. 144 pages
Genres: Sports & Outdoors. Non-fiction
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on Sep 21 2015

"Avery’s writing borders on a stream of consciousness. He mentions events, then meanders off in another direction, leaving readers hanging...What hurts the book most, though, is its disorganization. Tighter editing and a more coherent narrative would have helped Avery deliver a more powerful story."

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