The Island by Lucinda Lane

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While on vacation at a mysterious resort known only as "The Island" an encounter with a handsome stranger leads to a night to remember as both Janet and Mitch submit to the desires of a domineering alpha male. As their most secret fantasies are revealed by a man who seems to know everything about them they begin to suspect there is more going on than meets the eye.

Please note this 9000 word erotic story is intended for adults only and contains an encounter between a domineering alpha male and loving husband and wife (Mmf).


"Before I go. I've told you all about me. You know why I'm here. What about you?"


"I wasn't talking to you Janet. I know why you're here. I was talking to Mitch."

It felt like the temperature in the room had dropped. I found myself pulling my robe tighter around me. Was he a guest like us or did he work here? Either one scared me. I know what I'd said in the questionnaire but that was just a fantasy. It was never supposed to be real.

"Look, we're just here to get away for a bit and have a bit of fun."

"Oh, Mitch. You could have gone anywhere for a bit of fun. You paid a small fortune for the privilege of what?"

"I really think you should go."

"Janet." He turned to face me and I thought I saw some genuine anger flickering in his eyes. I was suddenly aware of the distance we were from the main resort and any other cabin except for his. "We know why you're here. You want to make sure everyone gets a good look at your body. Congratulations. Mission accomplished. I was talking to Mitch."

I felt the blood rush to my head. How dare he speak to us like that? How dare he speak to me like that? I waited for Mitch to hit him. It wouldn't be the first time. But all I saw in his eyes was indecision. It was like he was caught in the headlights.

"Mitch?" Mitch do something.

"I.. I.." What was wrong with him? This was not the man I knew.

"Mitch. You know your wife wants me to take her don't you?"

I do. Damn it. I do . "How dare you..."

"JANET." He stood now and turned to face me. Talking through gritted teeth as if struggling to stay calm. "If you speak again before I give you permission to, you will regret it."
I stood silent. Stunned.

"Mitch. Do you want me to take your wife? Is that why you're here?"

His head dropped. He wouldn't meet my eyes.

About Lucinda Lane

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Published December 31, 2013 32 pages
Genres: Erotica, Literature & Fiction. Fiction

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For Sherry Shumard's Vicky Wainright in Heartbroken Promises 2, a young, inexperienced nurse left in her new brother-in-law’s island beach house while her sister honeymoons in a secret location, her plight begins when she meets and falls for the frail waiter of the house, Noah.

Jun 15 2010 | Read Full Review of The Island

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