...some characters (Henry in particular) can feel inauthentic at times. Nevertheless, Streeter’s world is interesting and has potential; here’s hoping the writing will improve as the series continues.
There’s a lot of talk about portals and time and space that’s not entirely clear. Readers may not be able to decide if the world Streeter offers actually makes sense, but if an engaging narrative is what readers crave, complete comprehension may be a sacrifice worth making.